hey everyone so this is pick a path 3 hope you like it and make sure you like it its a about a earthquake. leave some comments
I am a Year 5 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. My teacher is Miss H. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
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Hi Eliza
ReplyDeletel like your pick a path story . it is very good. and why did you do a good story.from Jessica .
I cannot wait for your reply .from Jessica
thank you but what could i add next i'm not that sure maybe you know its ok. from the creator Eliza fom south hornby school! :)
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